Contents Page Draft

Draft 1

Draft 2

I do not feel the pictures are in the best positions. There is also too much yellow on the page, to improve this I will use my other key colours or bright pink and blue. The pictures and the text about them also need to link together more. The editor’s letter is also in the wrong place and need editing as it is too long, and needs to advertise the magazine better. I prefer the "In additions" box on this draft and it looks more structured.  I need to include my double page spread, and the cover lines from the front cover.

Draft 3

I have changed the colours of the text about the pictures, which I much prefer. I like the structure on this page better than the others. There is quite a lot of blank space on this page which I need to fill in with more stories and pictures. I need to add a signature from the editor and page numbers for the pictures.

I have used the same background as my front cover, so there is cohesion. I need to change the positions of the pictures and give them page numbers and a brief summary of what each feature, and picture are about. I need to add an editor’s letter. The plus sections need some editing as well.