Do you feel discriminated against personally?
“I think all women are discriminated against. There’s so many examples. When they cut women’s clits off, that the most extreme version and that happens all the time. But even our society, women earn less money for the same work. That’s Crazy.”
· Discriminated and personally – both complex word.
· There’s – informal language. More conversational.
· Cut women’s Clits – shocking, rude words. Less formal more conversational. Rebellious.
· But (starting a sentence) – informal, more conversational feel.
· That’s Crazy. – add emphasis.
· Varying sentence length makes it more interesting to read.
· (Brackets) are used to add extra information.
· Fillers such as – “Yeah”
· Formal language in first paragraph – obscurity, spawning
· References to material goods – Marlborough Lights, Calvin Kline.
· Use of numbers – age, dates, tour dates.
· Song titles used.
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